Presumably it will not also be a running commentary on the public address system!
Now that would be ironic in view of another ongoing discussion on the forum.
It sounds like a good idea - but why this incomprehensible jargon?
"Guided tour telling you about the line and where you are going" - if that's what I can gather from the text, but I find the announcement hard to read too. I put the text of it through some readability tests online ...
https://readable.com/text/Results Score Text
D ReadablePro Rating
13.2 Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level
14.9 Gunning Fog Index
1046 Syllable Count
607 Word Count
28 Sentence Count
24 Paragraph Count
5 Spelling Errors
10 Grammar Errors
57 Readability and Quality Issues
Understanding those, in turn, is not easy ...
Gunning Fox Index score of 7 or 8 is ideal, and anything higher than 12 is too complex for most people to read.
and on Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level
30.0–10.0 College graduate Very difficult to read. Best understood by university graduates.
Excellent idea if I understand the verbal forest correctly - we did a guided tour/talk on the TransWilts back on 2018 for Community Rail folks headed for the Great Western Community Rail Dinner and Conference and it was a great success that could be built on.